The Walk
Today we went on Kinder’s first walk. If you don’t know who Kinder is, he is my new puppy and my first, Kinder is a brown Labrador with a white diamond on his chest. We went out to the lake in the Liffey park. He dipped his paws in the lake but it was way too cold for him so we just walked on the path and grass. Kinder was happy and so was my family, we got him a new Burberry styled collar from the pet shop after our big long walk.
The End
Haigh Robyn,
Well my first reaction after reading your 100WC was ahhhhhhhh. I could feel the love and care Kinder was receiving through your words in you 100 WC. You included so many touching details in your piece, the diamond on his chest, dipping his paws in the Liffey, the Burberry collar etc.
Your piece was like 100 words of contentment and happiness, a real feel good piece of writing.
You know sometimes things don’t need to big and dramatic to be effective, great job Robyn. Keep it up!
Lovely piece, I could easily visualise walking along the path by the lake! I really liked the flow of writing, told in a gentle way using words like ‘dipped.’
Kinder is one lucky puppy, receiving a Burberry styled collar! 😉
Great job Robyn.