Me and my fellow pirates only want one thing and that’s gold !! We love the smell and the the feel of it , we dream about it and can’t stop thinking about it.This means we’re always trying to find lost treasure , sometimes we even steal off other pirates !!
“Ooh would ya look at that there, a boat how convenient , I think we should battle them “. ‘Woah ‘ they just shot a cannon that almost hit us ..Now it’s our turn ‘Bang’ we hit them with our cannon .As they swim away we searched their boat and found a beautiful ancient viola .
“Aye that’s no gold but it sure is treasure”
rang4mairead
Ag foghlaim le chéile
Haigh Josh,
what a great 100WC, I loved your opening lines, from them it is very clear how much the pirates love gold and they are written in such a humorous way,”we dream about it”.
Your dialogue was brilliant, I could hear the distinct way pirates talk,” Ooh”, “Aye”, “Woah” and it brought the battle to life to be able to hear what the pirate was saying.
Finally, in your ending the pirates discover there is more to treasure than just gold, I can just see the crew of pirates sitting back, relaxing after a day of pillaging (stealing), listening to classical music on their newly stolen viola😀.
Well done Josh, great use of all the prompts and a very enjoyable 100WC.