Naoise

Summer job

“Patrick you need to get a Summer job” said mam” Ok mam I hear they are looking for new people in Smthys.”  On Patrick’s first day he was asked to move the pink bicycle. Patrick had a great idea he jumped on the bicycle and started to cycle down the bubble aisle when he lost control of the bicycle and he went straight into the bubble stand. Bang! The bubbles fell. All the bottles were empty, John the store  manger came running and slipped on the bubble solution, sliding down the aisle on his bottom shouting “Patrick you are  fired!”

4 thoughts on “Naoise

  1. Hi Naoise,
    Just wanted to congratulate you on being in the showcase, you must be very proud of a great story, it was like a great comedy sketch, I don’t think anyone would be able to read it without smiling at the end, it so easy picture the scene with the fabulous description you gave. you brightened my day😂

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