Timmy “Timtastic” saves the day again!
One day as we took an afternoon stroll, Timmy aka Timtastic, was running free by the riverside. An old man was fishing nearby. Timmy suddenly froze and stared at the man he had just caught a huge fish and it was so strong that it pulled him into the river. The old man wasn’t able to swim. Timmy stopped staring and ran as fast as his legs could carry him, he leapt into the river in attempt to save the old man’s life. Thankfully Timmy succeeded. He used his mouth to grab the man by his t-shirt and pulled him out. The man thanked Timmy and as a reward he gave us the fish he caught for our dinner.
Haigh Seán,
The return of Timtastic, fabulous!
What another great 100WC, it all started off so serenely, a lovely walk along the river but Timmy was vigilant.
You have a mixture of great phrases, eg.” suddenly froze”, “as fast as his legs would carry him” expressive verbs eg. “grabbed”, “lept” and the action moved along at a appropriate fast pace by using short sentences. I could very much feel the drama in your 100WC.
I loved the ending of rewarding Timmy with the fish that nearly caught the fisherman.
Great job Seán.