One day I went to visit my uncle’s farm with my mum and there were tiny cute piglets there. I asked my mum a million times if I could have one, but the answer was NO!
The next time we went to the farm I decided I would sneak one home in my schoolbag. When I got home with the piglet, he started to snort. I said to myself “should I really do this?”. When mum saw the piglet, she was really cross and we had to bring him straight back to the farm.
But we got a goldfish instead, called Terry, on the way home.
Hi Isabel, I really liked your story, very well written with good punctuation and I loved the happy ending!
Haigh Isabel,
I loved your 100WC it was so funny, just like in real life children think if they ask their parents for something a million times their parents might change their minds and then stealing the pig and it snorting in the house, how did your character imagine he/she was going to keep a pig quiet in the house, I found this all very funny.I loved your ending of the parents allowing the child to have a goldfish for a pet and I loved the name Terry, it is nice to have a happy ending
Well done Isabel you left this reader smiling, a really enjoyable 100WC.
Haigh Isobel,
I love this cute funny story, the lighthearted humour flows through it. Mentioning family members and goldfish Terry makes it personal and relatable.
I would’ve stolen a piglet too Isabel!
CONGRATULATIONS ON BEING IN THE INTERNATIONAL SHOWCASE , YOU MUST BE THRILLED.