THE CORNFIELD ALIENS…
John was an alien, he was flying around with his whole family, his mum, his dad, his brother, his sister, his granny and granddad. They also had a very big alien dog that came with them wherever they went.
They were travelling from planet to planet looking for life. Next stop for them was Earth, they were going to see what it had to offer.
They landed at the edge of a cornfield and made their way to a small city with lots of people, they were looking through store windows, but the people in the city started chasing them back to the cornfield, they started the spaceship and disappeared into the night…….
Haigh Conor,
I just love the visual of the entire alien family and the fact that you includied the alien dog flying around together exploring the planets, I would say they have some fun and some arguments in that spaceship.
I felt really sorry for them when they were looking in store windows and when the people started chasing them back to the cornfield and they had to leave, you made nice use of the prompt at this stage of the story.
You showed great imagination in this 100WC and I loved the name of your alien, John.. Well done Conor
Lovely flow of writing Conor showing a great imagination. I like that the alien family appear humanised (make something human) by your description of the family set-up, the pet dog and an alien by the name of John.
It is easy to imagine the family flying around the solar system, unfortunately they didn’t receive a nice reception on Earth…I’d like to know why!
Keep up the good work Conor!