100wc W31 – Rachel

I woke up, panting I looked at my alarm clock it read ‘ 2:03am’. I had only been asleep for a few hours.  I heard the noise again. It was the same one that woke me.  It sounded like a man with a really high-pitched scream. He was probably just messing around but if I was up I might as well check it out. So I opened the blinds. There was a dark scary tree hanging over the moon. I looked down there was a man  being attacked. Well I can tell you one thing, no way I’m going to save him at this time of the night!

3 thoughts on “100wc W31 – Rachel

  1. Have you ever thought that werewolves are just hairy men that scream like girls? Ooh spooky story Rachel I really love the detail.

  2. Hi Rachel,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.

    But… that poor man … I don’t think you can just close the blinds and go back to bed! You have to call someone … your parents, guards …etc

    I love reading stories from other Irish Classes.
    Keep up the great work & keep writing in these uncertain times.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)


  3. Hi Rachel, I love the way you describe everything that happens from the beginning to the end of your story, your use of verbs and your imagination creates suspense and intrique and makes the reader want to know more and keep reading. Keep up the great work!

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