100wc W31 – Liam

It was a dark and perfectly clear night. Two helpless, defenceless children were exploring a forest in the night. It was very scary because forests are just like that at night. One of the children felt a cold chill go down his spine, but that was because he forgot his coat. The other one felt someone was watching her, but that was her brother. She just stepped in a big pile dog poop and that looked very funny. But then they both heard a scream that made both of their hair stand on end……. Of course, the scream was from their mam yelling at them to come home.

One thought on “100wc W31 – Liam

  1. The scariest thing ever! A mad mam It was great where you made the reader believe that something scary was going to happen but it was just their mam

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