100wc W31 – Daithí

The robber with a secret

Yesterday my house was robbed by a something that teared down our door with brute force stole thing expensive and ran away. No evidence was found except a lump of hair that appeared to be of a dog. The robber stole my phone which had a tracking app so my mum can find me wherever I am. We followed the phone to a field and waited for the robber to return. A few minutes later we heard footsteps I saw the robber sit down in front of the full moon and a few seconds later I could see why, he’s a werewolf! Suddenly he ran towards us. I was scared, I ran. To be continued…..

5 thoughts on “100wc W31 – Daithí

  1. Haigh Daithí,
    Firstly I loved the title of your 100WC.
    Your opening line really got my attention, a robbery, brute force damage and expensive property missing, this just said to me,”Read on read on”. I loved the idea of using technology to solve the problem of the stolen property, it made me smile because these days technology is being a friend to many and helping many people, so to see that turn up in your story was very apt.
    I wasn’t sure how you were going to get the picture prompt in but you did it, I actually went back to the picture to make sure there was a full moon, I’m such a stickler!
    Well done Daithí.

  2. Hi Daithi,
    Well done on your story this week. I really enjoyed your writing. You have used some great vocabulary and describing words.
    I like how you ended your story on a cliff hanger…you left me wanting to know what happens next!
    Well done again.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c

  3. Hi Daithí, well done again on another very good 100WC with lots of descriptions, imagination and suspense! Keep up the good work.

  4. I really like this piece Daithí, especially the way it unravels to reveal the robber is a werewolf. Great use of the prompt, combining the imagery associated with a full moon.

    Great imagination and well written using lots of adjectives.

    I really like the idea of the tracking device! I would love to know what happens next, especially if you can outrun the werewolf!

    Keep up the great writing.

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