Liam

The year was 2079 and war had been waging for five years. It had been going back and forth for ages, but it has been quite one sided ever since the invention of the mechs, or as we call them, the Lego suits. They have all the things that are needed in a war, bombs, guns, all that. We call them the “Lego suits” because they look like people are attached to a life size Lego person. They are also colour coded for each area of employment. I just hope the war will be over soon.

3 thoughts on “Liam

  1. Kia ora from New Zealand Liam!
    No doubt like us you are pout of school right now, but it is good to see that you are writing.
    I like your very original idea here, about the reality of the soldiers, and your use of quotation marks for ‘Lego suits’.
    If you get a chance, come and see my class blog at: https://rakau19.edublogs.org/

  2. Hi Liam,
    This was a great way to respond to the prompt this week; you made great use of literary devices and bold choices in setting your story in the future.
    Keep it up.

  3. Hi Liam,
    Loved the way you immersed us straight into this futurist world you created for us, you have such an amazing imagination I will never look at LEGO in the same way.
    Fantastic job and I hope the war will over soon too.

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