One day Ben was out playing football with his friends. Ben accidentally kicked the ball into the woods. It was stuck between something furry. Ben screamed “it’s a furry monster!”. Ben realised he was friendly. He came out his friend was there. They both agreed to go inside for the night. In Ben’s sleep he was dreaming about the monster. The next morning he sneaked into the woods. The monster wasn’t there. Driving out was an animal control vehicle. Ben could hear loud rap music. The monster climbed out the window slowly. Ben ran towards the house so did the monster. Ben let him into the shed and let him live there. And they were both happy.
Hi Seán,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
I’m not sure that I would be so trusting of a furry monster driving a vehicle. I’m glad everyone was happy in the end.
Good work this week.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/
Thanks Mrs Boyce 😊
nice story 😎
Hi Sean I love the way that the furry monster is so talented that he can drive a car!
Ciaran
I felt said for the monster maybe he just wanted a friend and he got one Ben. Good job Sean
Good one,
I liked the plot twist and the to little furry monster,
Robyn k
Good story sean😆😆😆 i tought that they would be playing soccer
Very funny Adam thanks😁
Hi Seán
very good story!
My favourite part was when they were all happy.
Thank you.
Sadhbh
Really nice story séan I wonder what happens to the monster after the story ends ??????
Thanks Josh 😁
Great story Sean you are very good at writing make part 2
Thanks daithi😀
Seán
Fantastic story
My favourite part was when Ben let him into the shed and let him live there
👏 Rachel
Thanks Rachel😁
Nice story! Can you consider making a part two?
-Ruby