The Rogue Landing (part 4)
After a few hours of walking we found a deserted military hangar. We sat down at one of the hills around it. “Maybe I could fly one of the planes?” Eagle suggested. “Yeah.” Wolf replied. The hangar had an eerie feeling. Like it was a trap of some sort. “This place gives me the chills.” I said, anxious. “Me too.” Snake replied. We found a nice little jet, just big enough to fit all of us. Once we got in, Eagle immediately went to the cockpit. “It looks like it has been shut down.” He called back to us. “Hey, Snake can you fix this?” He said, as Snake shuffled into the cockpit. “Sure.” She answered. In about ten minutes she got it back and running. “I did NOT think it would fly” Wolf said. Well, he was right. Because as soon as we were ten metres above the ground we were back down, and surrounded.
Hi Liam
I love this 100WC. I enjoyed the way you referenced this as Part 4 – is it really the fourth part or have you just used a really sophisticated writing technique? The writing is fast paced which keeps up the suspense. Fantastic.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand
Hi Mrs P, Thanks for the nice comment!
And yes, this is the 4th part of my story.
If you would like to read them here are the links to;
Part 1: http://rang4mairead.edublogs.org/2019/11/16/liam-3/
Part 2 http://rang4mairead.edublogs.org/2019/11/23/liam-4/
Sadly I coudn’t find part 3.
Thanks for the nice comment!
Liam
Liam I like the way that you took parts from Alex rider and put them together 🙂 From DAITHI
I like your story Liam are you going to do a part 5?