Ríona

I wanted to be strong like my dad. So I went to the shed. I knew that dad kept his weights in there so I opened the door and looked for his weights they were pretty easy to find. I tried to pick it up but it was heavier than I expected. Then remember that dad was very strong so he the heaviest ring on it so I just put it to the lowest ring and picked it up. But it was still too heavy. So I just changed it up again. It worked. I was happy.

 

 

The end.

3 thoughts on “Ríona

  1. Riona,

    Really interesting story! It flowed very nicely, making it very easy to read!
    Keep up the good work!

    Emily, Team100, Edinburgh, UK.

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