I wanted to be strong like my dad. So I went to the shed. I knew that dad kept his weights in there so I opened the door and looked for his weights they were pretty easy to find. I tried to pick it up but it was heavier than I expected. Then remember that dad was very strong so he the heaviest ring on it so I just put it to the lowest ring and picked it up. But it was still too heavy. So I just changed it up again. It worked. I was happy.
The end.
i like your story! i love the part when he cant lift up the weights.
From Ruby 🙂
Riona,
Really interesting story! It flowed very nicely, making it very easy to read!
Keep up the good work!
Emily, Team100, Edinburgh, UK.
I loved your story Ríona . From Aimee!