Isobel

AN ODD WORLD

Once upon a time there was a girl called Kate who went to an odd world. “I thought we were going to Happy land” said Kate. “We are in HAPPY LAND” said Mum. It looked liked a town has been on fire. There was a person standing on the bridge. But the bridge was white. It looked like it was new. They went over to the man. “HELLO MY LITTLE CORNFLAKES !!!!” he shouted. “WELCOME TO HAPPY LAND!!!!.”   “Why is every thing burnt down?” asked Dad. “Its meant to look like that its happy land. That’s not happy” said Kate. What an odd world!!!!!!.

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  1. What a strange place you’ve imagined Isobel; there’s hint of Alice’s adventures, together with a sprinkling of Oz. I wonder what made the town looked like it had been burned? What caused it do you think? And who was the man on the bridge?
    As you said, how odd!
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.

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