The weird dream
Hi my name is Alexa. I live in Sydney Australia I live near Sydney’s opera house. My father is pretty rich. He owns a very nice hotel called the golden palace. In two weeks I’m going on a trip two Florida.
Two weeks later…..
Mom I have my suit case!!
13 hours later…….
Are we nearly here mom? Yes were here
(OK let’s fast forward the trip)
___ ___ ___ ___ ___ ___ ___ ___ ___ ___ ___
(Were back)
4 hours later……
Hey mom were is our house??!!
I don’t know it’s replaced with plastic figures
Turns out it was just a dream I was still on the plane.
Hi Karl,
What I really liked was the different style of writing you used, sharp, concise and to the point, it was very minimalistic ( simple and plain), but the story moved on very well with the timings you gave.
Well done Karl.