Caleb

The Bright Helicopter Light

So one dark night a man was walking home from getting his shopping. He was somehow able to see many things. He saw usual stuff you see when it’s dark. Trees, dark homes and walls. Then suddenly, he saw three helicopters in the sky! They were coming closer to the man. He then saw them putting out a light that was dangerously bright. The man started walking a little faster. Then he was starting to jog. Soon enough, he was running. It was quite hard due to his shopping. When he saw his house, he was fine, until… the light blinded him…

3 thoughts on “Caleb

  1. I enjoyed reading this piece, Caleb. I can imagine it looked as if the helicopters had put out the light, but clearly they hadn’t because it must have been in the man’s house. I would suggest in your next piece of writing giving the main character a name, and also using your sense of hearing as well as sight. You have great potential.

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