Fresh new crepes…
It was Thursday morning
{Well it was actually Thursday evening anyway}
I was just after finishing school and I was on my to get some new fresh crepes
{Aka what young cool people like me call shoes}
After a while I got my shoes and I was running over to boots
{No not the one from Dora the explorer the pharmacy boots}
Anyway I was going over to boots to get a razor
Because I badly needed one because boy if I don’t shave at least every week I look like a gorilla!
I was pretty fast running over to boots if I do say so myself but as I was running I tripped over yellow bricks?
I know it sounds weird but they were everywhere???
And no surprise here I ended up in hospital didn’t get the razors and ended up looking like a gorilla so yeah!
Hi Lilly
I really liked your story it was really funny
thank you Ella-Mae xx
LILLY!!!! That was so funny I loved the way you used the prompts and when I read the title I didn’t expect the story to be like that I expected it to be about pancakes or crepes NOT SHOES AND RAZORS!!!!!!!!! I loved the way you used the word gorilla that was really clever I loved it and I thought the last sentence was really funny YOU DIDN’T GET THE RAZORS AND ENDED UP LOOKING LIKE A GORILLA😂😂🤣🤣keep up the great work,
Elma.
thank you so much Elma!
That was a BRILLIANT story Lily!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved the way you said that you ended up looking like a gorilla
thank you so much Eilis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this!
thank you Olivia