RING RING
It was a Monday .I was reading my book. My brother was watching tv my were cooking dinner. I was getting tired and I slowly drifted off .I was still fast asleep when I heard a phone ringing. I jumped up to turn my phone off but then I noticed it was on silent .I could still hear the sound .I got up and started to walk .I got to the music room .I could still hear the sound. I wondered what was behind the door .It was the cat playing the xylophone .
Lovely story Emma, I got the shivers thinking of a phone ringing while on silent, but a funny twist in the end was very nice. Maith thú! Mairéad
Well Done Emma,I liked the plot twist at the end.
PS I am in your class.
LIBBY
Very good story Emma. I like the way you made it funny and not horror or mystery like most other people.