It was a cold night. I was starving. I was searching around the dark house. After a while I gave up. I started to walk into the utility room. I could not see where I was going. I bumped into a door. I eventually found a light and Iturned it on. I stared at the door for a while. Then I wondered what was behind the door. I opened it and I saw stacks and stacks of gold. I also saw diamonds, rubies and emeralds. For a minute I wondered should I take it or leave it there. It was a hard decision. But I made up my mind.
Hello Cathal,
We liked that you left the ending open, that the reader didn’t know what decision you made!
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Maith thú Cathal, I really liked the ending, keeping the Reader guessing! Lean ort, Mairéad
I loved that so much i like the way you did not tell us what you did. great story bye
thanks great comment